It had heart-
But I think you need some more practive first. I can tell you had a vision of what you wanted to happen, but you just couldn't get it out exactly the same way you imagined. I'm the same way. Though it wasn't spectacular in the visual department, it wasn't horrible. It just needed work. The sound was good, although the voice work took some time to just click into place. The story and the way it's told are excellent.
Bottom line: Keep it up, but try and work on the graphics.